There is nothing wrong with my negatives.

9- Although it is a profile of Christina's face, you can see her concentration on the game and the layers of the image (the shoulder infront of her is blurred, thus proving layers)
11- Aaron is centered in the frame and you can see his emotion/action (giggling and moving to another spot)

Filling The Frame

The frame is filled with various wires and the guy working on them. You can also see layers in the picture: the wall in the back, the guy working on the wires in the middle (focused), and the wires themselves up close. This also fills up the frame.

Action and Emotion

In this picture, you can see the concentration on the guy's face and the action of him reaching for another book.

The Story

In the picture, three girls are working on a car. You can tell by the concentration on their faces, their fingers pointing to specific parts of the car, and the fact that they have notes with them. The story is of the obvious interest in mechanics.

Environmental Self Portrait Contest
The simplicity of this photo is what drew me in. It shows emotion through hand gestures, body language, and the overall image together. The lighting helps put the spotlight on the person in the photo so that all your attention is put to her.

The clouds are moving in this picture and there is a little bit of a blur caused by the movement. The bars that are right up close are sharp, but the clouds are soft. There is no warping.

In this picture, there is a lady walking down a sidewalk, no cars moving. The woman is the only blur in the picture and everything else is sharp and in focus. There is no warping.